One night in 1988 my friend and i were walking around town and suddenly we heard a strange sound coming from this rusty old apartment it seemed like someone was hurt so we went in to cheek when we went in it when it turned terribly quite. Dust is everywhere when your walk the wind brings the dust up to your face dust got in my eye when i looked back my friend was gone I yelled her 3 she did not answer i heard a creepy sound i ran out of the apartment to my mum.
Friday, 24 August 2018
One night in 1988 my friend and i were walking around town and suddenly we heard a strange sound coming from this rusty old apartment it seemed like someone was hurt so we went in to cheek when we went in it when it turned terribly quite. Dust is everywhere when your walk the wind brings the dust up to your face dust got in my eye when i looked back my friend was gone I yelled her 3 she did not answer i heard a creepy sound i ran out of the apartment to my mum.
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Good story Summer - I’m pleased it was not you who disappeared into the dust though!
ReplyDeleteHi Summer
ReplyDeleteI really like how you described the old rusty apartment. Next time reread your writing.
from Milan G
Hi Summer
ReplyDeletei liked how you described how you felt.Next time you could check your spelling.
from Alexi