Tuesday 17 March 2020

Limerick poem

            Limerick Poem

There was a fat lazy cat named mat.
That chased a skinny old rat.
Then the cat ate a carrot and 
Turned into a parrot.

That's one funny cat named mat.

4 comments:

  1. Hello Summer,

    My name is bianca and i am from glenbrae school and i am a year 8. I like how you had added a lot of ryhming words into your limerick. I really enjoyed reading your limerick. Keep up the good work

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  2. Hi Summer

    How are you doing during this Level 4 lockdown? I hope there are some fun things happening at your house? What have you been up to?

    I enjoyed reading your poem about your fat lazy cat called mat! Great work!
    Remember to go and check out the Totara site about some of the fun things that you can do during this time! I look forward to reading more of your work.
    Remember if you create or make anything at home to take a picture and post it on your blog so that we can all see what you have been up to.

    Talk again soon

    Mrs Costello :)

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  3. Hey Summer
    Cool limerick,I really like how you have used rhyming words.I also like how it is funny, I don't think this could happen in real life though.
    How did you come up with all these ideas?
    Maybe next time you could add a little bit of colour to bright it up, so when the readers are scrolling through your blog they stop and read it.
    But anyway great limerick
    See you next time,Pyper

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  4. hi summer it is cruz i like the the limerick poem and it was funny how did you come up with these rhyming word?

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